katngo73

Hi, sunshine! I really loved the amount of vivid imagery employed throughout your poem, especially with the use of specific, impactful diction like "powdered" and "snaking". The only main issue ...

Hey there, sunshine! Kat here for a review! I would like to first note how much I loved the short tartness of this piece, as well as the inclusion of ...

Hey there, sunshine! Kat here for a late-night review (Woo!). I think the main issue that I'm having with your poem is the amount of repetition that seems to take ...

Hello, there! Kat here for a review, and, holy cheesecake, this is ABSOLUTELY MAGNIFICENT! I especially loved your use of repetition throughout the short story, especially that of what the ...

Hey, lovely! Kat here for a review, and I really enjoy the passion and effort you put into this. It's obvious that you strived to communicate your feelings and thoughts! ...

Hey, sunshine! Woah! This is incredible, and I love it(not the killing! the writing!!). I found quite a few spelling and grammatical errors, which I have corrected below, such as: ...

Hey, sunshine! I hope you're having an INCREDIBLE day today! This piece was so beautiful, and I feel like you could definitely turn it into a novel if you thought ...

Hey, sunshine! I hope you're having a WONDERFUL day today! This piece was really really REALLY pretty and beautifully intricate. The way you worded everything just spoke to me. The ...

Hey, sunshine! Wow, aren't you quite the narcissist? That's okay, though, because you're a wonderful writer! I love love love your voice in this piece. It shows so blatantly, yet ...

Hi, sunshine! I hope you're having a FANTASTIC day today! This poem was so pretty and cute and beautiful. It made me smile so much my mouth hurts! In terms ...

Hi, sunshine! I hope you're having a FANTASTIC day today! You wrote a lot! And anyone can easily see that you were passionate about getting your thoughts out there. There ...

Hello, sunshine! Before providing you with some constructive criticism, I want to first give you my own opinion/reaction to the piece, and, saying that, I related so much to this. ...

Hello, sunshine! I firstly want to let you know how much I admire the amount of passion put into writing this. It looks like you worked hard on it(and maybe ...

Hello, sunshine! I'm going to first talk about your strong points in this poem. I loved your particular use of certain words to set up the tone. Though I usually ...

Hello, sunshine! This was such an entirely beautiful piece. I especially enjoyed the large range of vocabulary. Words are important, especially which type of words that you use! I also ...