katchaerin

HWOWH! I love it. Honest. I'll just leave the grammar nitpicking to the others 'cause I guess that's not my thing, yet. Although my chest seems too tight right now, ...

Hey there! I like it. Your descriptions are clear, and I felt as if I were in your place. :) Your theme was likeable. :)) Keep writing! I'll be reading ...

Uh... I don't know what to say. I don't like the title much. Honestly, when I read this, I had to read it over and over again. I just had ...

I never get to read a lot stories using the second person, and you wrote it pretty well! Awh, it was too bad for a little boy looking for his ...

Hey there! One day of perfection, would be great. But even I know, It's an endless wait I like this part! I don't know why, but I just do. Keep ...

He needed all the help he could get in Science and Math however, constantly asking why algebra, trigonometry or Pythagoras mattered in a world as simple as his own. I ...

Hey there! Well to start off, Snoink made some points and I guess she's right. Monday with you - hmm...I like the title. But I guess it would've been much ...

Is this suppose to be a poem or you just need a help from a math problem? HAHA. I had to laugh at this. Yeah, you have a point. Well, ...

HWOWH! I felt as if I was going to cry too. HONEST! It seemed odd, however, repeating that the tears were hot and salty, and it tickles. Nevertheless, it's pretty ...

Hey there! I liked it! The leather is warm and sticky under my legs, and the taxi smells like B.O. and cheap cologne, but I don’t care. My lips are ...

Well, it lacks something else, and I don't know what it is. I guess I'll know it when I read it. XD Sorry. I actually didn't get it the first ...

Okay, this isn't too good. I wrote it a couple years ago for school and then lost it... and then found it again :D Glad you found it! Please tell ...

Sitting firmly like a Tudor in his old throne-couch in front of his 21 inch TV watching his favorite TV series, Rey, an eighteen year-old fearless lad wearing his LA ...

This is the first rhyming poem I had read in like, two weeks. Wow. It really is refreshing to read a poem like this. Tell your friend that this is ...

She was beautiful. it should be is (if the MC still finds her beautiful) Her light green eyes full of passion every time she kissed him. Her light brown hair ...