Published May 31, 2010
Lives are for living
I live for you
Dreams are for dreaming
I dream for you
Hearts are for beating
Mine beats for you
Angels are for keeping
I keep you
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I didn't actually write this. My best friend did and she wanted me to put it up here. I tae no credit
Georgie
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This is the first rhyming poem I had read in like, two weeks.
Wow. It really is refreshing to read a poem like this.
Tell your friend that this is really good. *thumbs up*
It also is cute.
Other poems had lost their meaning because of the other things they had focused on, like the words they used.
This one is...awesome. XD
Tell your friend to keep writing. XD
-KAT <3
That's soo good!!! I really enjoyed it!
I like how it changes on the last two lines,
tell your friend she's done a good job!!
Oh, and welcome to YWS!!! =-)
Bunnie.
Hi,
Welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here.
This is really lovely. I'd change the last line as it's a bit short. Maybe "keeping" should be changed to something different.
Hope this helps (your friend),
Jas
This is a really great poem! Tell your friend she is awesome. I especially liked the continuous correlation between two lines throughout the poem. A lot of times I see someone write a great poem and then change the format at the end. This gives a fresh insight on love (I presume). Keep writing!
Kate