Published August 8, 2010
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HAHA. I had to laugh at this. Yeah, you have a point.
Well, like what others said, this may or may not be a poem.
But I DO love the meaning underlying this line.
I think what you meant here was,
me + you = (like) as one. (or you two become one) HAHA.
Sorry, I don't know how to express this better.
Keep writing, though.
-KAT <3
Well first of all, I wouldn't really call it a poem, but an interesting thought.
Second.. it's totally ambiguous.
It can be that two people never stay together, and eventually you're always left by yourself. I can be that two people come together so completely that they become almost a single entity. It can be that you always feel alone, no matter who you're with. This is, obviously, without the explanation of the writer above. c:
Nice thought.
-Coral
Thanks for the comments I'll keep them in mind.
Philosophical! Are you trying to tell us that, even when you add another person to your life, you still feel alone?
I actually laughed when I saw it.
~Roon
By reading that one and only line, I could not tell if the audience was supposed to see this as an incorrect math problem, or a cold and lonely one-liner.
~Lindsay
"It is not the mountain we conquer but ourselves." ~Edmund Hillary
Is this suppose to be a poem or you just need a help from a math problem?
I think it's a little simple..it's a great emotional thought..like in that small equation we can feel your lonliness; but maybe if that were the title and you wrote a little. I do like it at that but I'd like more
just my suggestion 