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Re: Y.W.S.
This is an interesting way of looking at poetry and how we often post it online now. I like how there's not really a set rhyming scheme because while some ...
Sep 16, 2019 -
Re: I Bite my nails
First off, hi!!! Welcome to YWS, it's a wonderful, supportive community! Thank you for joining!! Second, I absolutely love this poem! You've created impressive visuals here that I really relate ...
Sep 13, 2019 -
Re: Candy
I am in absolute awe at how well written this is. It is detailed and well thought out and just absolutely amazing. I love that you've written it to be ...
Sep 6, 2019 -
Re: ๐๐ช๐ญ๐ ๐ธ๐ฏ ๐ฝ๐ฑ๐ฎ ๐๐ฎ๐ช๐ผ๐ฝ
I'm honestly not sure of what to say that hasn't already been said. This is an amazing piece where you've painted a picture of the goddess Diana in a poetic ...
Sep 6, 2019 -
Re: ๐๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ง๐ช๐จ๐ฉ
Hiya!! I wanted to stop by and just congratulate you on how amazingly written this poem is. From your descriptions and word choice to the stark images that they create, ...
Sep 3, 2019 -
Re: Phoenix
Your exquisite use of imagery and detail has painted an amazing picture throughout this piece!! Every word draws me in more and more and by the end, I was in ...
Aug 29, 2019 -
Re: Love and trust.
Hiya! First off, welcome to YWS! I'm very new here too but I received such a warm welcome that I thought I'd pay it forward on to you as well! ...
Aug 27, 2019 -
Re: โNightmare
This is absolutely amazingly written! Your details allow for the reader to really visualize the nightmare, to engage with the story as they read. Your rhyming scheme was also well ...
Aug 23, 2019
