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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Bits and Pieces from her Midnight Diary..

    'Ello! haha, well,I'm Kam and I'm stopping in for a quick review! Lemme just say,it is quite an impressive story. I do like it, though it isn't my forte to ...

    May 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Roads

    Hey, I'm Kam and I'm gonna give you a nice little review :) Well, lemme just say, I LOVE...this poem. Positively ADOOORE it :) It really pulls in a reader ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: The Road From Here

    Hello there :) Im ka67, and I'm just gonna give you a little review :3 WEll, lemme begin with I actually really like the story just the way it is. ...

    May 14, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Yellow Flower

    Ello darling ,I'm here for your review :) Well, i do see a few typos in here. No completely noticeable but still there. 'knowing on one is listening' I am ...

    May 12, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Teen Fiction Re: The Blade

    Hey, I'm just going to leave a little review :) It is a good story, to start off with. You could lengthen it because it is only a long paragraph ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: James

    Hey, im just gonna leave a quick review :) Well, lemme just say it is very short, but it has a lot of potential. I enjoy the thought of it ...

    May 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Narrative Re: In the Land of Smoke and Haze

    Hey, I'm gonna write a review on this positively beautiful story!! :D I'm a bit rusty, I haven't reviewed in a while but then again I haven't seen such an ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: That Particular Juicy Fruit I Crave About Every Boring Morning

    Hey, so im gonna review and I haven't been on in a while so please mind my rusty words :3 First, this is a really pretty poem for one so ...

    Mar 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Ambition

    Hello! well, I'll just start off saying this poem is really good. I haven't read the ones that inspired it but feel as if I should now as the last ...

    Dec 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Eyes

    Hello!! Lemme start off by saying that I haven't been on in a while so if my review is a little unclear just reply so I can clear those things ...

    Sep 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Eric I hope you knew

    Hello. Well, first off let my say I hope your friend rests well and though I have never truly been bullied myself, I really do wish he had not. Eric ...

    Jun 30, 2013
  • Other » Dramatic, General Re: Discomfort of Home

    First off,Hi ;) I must say the story is incredible and that I do like it. Of course,since my forte isn't finding grammatical errors I won't try any of that ...

    Jun 11, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: I'm Done

    Hey, I'm gonna try and give a really good review ^-^ Well,first off I admit the poem drove me to my core as I have experienced some if not all ...

    Jun 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: All That Is Left

    Hello! thanks for the wall post and don;t ever hesitate to ask me to review something ;) I must say, the poem is incredible and on its own does not ...

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Short Story » Horror, General Re: Vince N Slicer

    Well, I must admit I loved the story! It was impressive and it was gruesome but I also have a few critiques that I hope are not to harsh. I ...

    Jun 1, 2013


Human minds are more full of mysteries than any written book and more changeable than the cloud shapes in the air.
— Louisa May Alcott