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Re: Bits and Pieces from her Midnight Diary..
'Ello! haha, well,I'm Kam and I'm stopping in for a quick review! Lemme just say,it is quite an impressive story. I do like it, though it isn't my forte to ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Roads
Hey, I'm Kam and I'm gonna give you a nice little review :) Well, lemme just say, I LOVE...this poem. Positively ADOOORE it :) It really pulls in a reader ...
May 21, 2014 -
Re: The Road From Here
Hello there :) Im ka67, and I'm just gonna give you a little review :3 WEll, lemme begin with I actually really like the story just the way it is. ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: Yellow Flower
Ello darling ,I'm here for your review :) Well, i do see a few typos in here. No completely noticeable but still there. 'knowing on one is listening' I am ...
May 12, 2014 -
Re: The Blade
Hey, I'm just going to leave a little review :) It is a good story, to start off with. You could lengthen it because it is only a long paragraph ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: James
Hey, im just gonna leave a quick review :) Well, lemme just say it is very short, but it has a lot of potential. I enjoy the thought of it ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: In the Land of Smoke and Haze
Hey, I'm gonna write a review on this positively beautiful story!! :D I'm a bit rusty, I haven't reviewed in a while but then again I haven't seen such an ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: That Particular Juicy Fruit I Crave About Every Boring Morning
Hey, so im gonna review and I haven't been on in a while so please mind my rusty words :3 First, this is a really pretty poem for one so ...
Mar 8, 2014 -
Re: Ambition
Hello! well, I'll just start off saying this poem is really good. I haven't read the ones that inspired it but feel as if I should now as the last ...
Dec 1, 2013 -
Re: The Eyes
Hello!! Lemme start off by saying that I haven't been on in a while so if my review is a little unclear just reply so I can clear those things ...
Sep 20, 2013 -
Re: Eric I hope you knew
Hello. Well, first off let my say I hope your friend rests well and though I have never truly been bullied myself, I really do wish he had not. Eric ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Discomfort of Home
First off,Hi ;) I must say the story is incredible and that I do like it. Of course,since my forte isn't finding grammatical errors I won't try any of that ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: I'm Done
Hey, I'm gonna try and give a really good review ^-^ Well,first off I admit the poem drove me to my core as I have experienced some if not all ...
Jun 2, 2013 -
Re: All That Is Left
Hello! thanks for the wall post and don;t ever hesitate to ask me to review something ;) I must say, the poem is incredible and on its own does not ...
Jun 1, 2013 -
Re: Vince N Slicer
Well, I must admit I loved the story! It was impressive and it was gruesome but I also have a few critiques that I hope are not to harsh. I ...
Jun 1, 2013
