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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Monument

    Hey! My name is Kam, and this is my first review in a verrry long time so hang with me :D I'm gonna start off with saying this is amazing. ...

    Aug 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Horror, Fantasy Re: Poor Girl

    Hello!! Kam here for a review today on your interesting horror poem!! :D I'm gonna separate it into three parts! The first will be grammar, capitalization, punctuation, all the little ...

    Mar 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Nightmare (Some Editing)

    Hello!! I'm Kam and I'm going to give you a review, and I do hope you find it helpful okay?? As you've requested, I won't lecture you on the grammar ...

    Mar 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: A Test of Will

    Hello! I'm Kam and I'll try and give you an awesome review for this awesome short story! I'll start first with Nitpicks like spelling or grammar or flow, and then ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Other Re: Missing

    Hello! I'm Kam, and I am here to give you a review! I hope it doesn't seem too harsh on you, and doesn't discourage you from writing anything similiar in ...

    Mar 5, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Flaws

    Hello there, I'm Kam! I'm here to write this very inspiring poem a review that I hope does it justice! To start, I'll be going for nitpicks like awkward sentences, ...

    Jan 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Dissolution

    Hello there!! Kam here with a review! I'm sorry if it is a bit lacking or confusing. I just wrote a long chapter to something I'm working on and my ...

    Jan 24, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: When the Balcony Collapses

    Hello! Kam here to give you a short review for your short poem!! To start my short little review, I shall congratulate you on NO MISTAKES!! :D None that really ...

    Jan 18, 2016
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Black Holes

    Hello lovely! I am here to give you a nice review which is, thank gosh!, not going to be too long :3 To start, I'l begin with all the technicalities; ...

    Dec 12, 2015
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: swim

    Hello there!! Welcome to YWS and I hope you are having a good time!! Anyway, I realize this is your first story and is bound to have some typos and ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Monitor Beeps

    Hello! Here to leave a review for ya! Granted, Im a tad bit rusty ,haven't done one in quite some time, so bear with me!! :D Okay, first things first! ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Ballpen

    Hello lovely person! I'm here to grant you a review! Forewarning, I haven't reviewed anything in quite sometime and I might be rusty or harsh or not to the point. ...

    Dec 11, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Hunt

    Hii! I'm going on a reviewing spree! :D My name is Kam, and I'm gonna do this in 3 little parts. 1) Grammar/spelling mistakes, 2)My opinion, and then 3) Improvements! ...

    Feb 27, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Horror Re: Gone

    Helllo! Kam here to review your lovely little piece! :D I'll start off with some grammar/spelling mistakes, followed by my opinion and lastly, what could be improved upon! 1) Grammar/ ...

    Feb 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Bound within your pages

    Hi! kam here with a quick review! :D Okay, lemme just start off by saying this whole things is actually really amazing in its simplicity. You don't take paragraphs upon ...

    Feb 27, 2015


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