jumpingsheep

Hi Traves! I've always loved narrative/epic poems and this was no exception. I enjoyed the way you ran with the image you were prompted by to create a chilling story. ...

Hello! Jumpingsheep here! I thought that this was an interesting little piece. I liked how you used the string as a mechanism to tie the story together. I've never heard ...

Hello! jumpingsheep here for a quick review! I don't know if you already turned this assignment in, but I thought I'd give feedback anyway. 1) "we’ve seen it all..." seems ...

Hello! jumpingsheep here for a review. I agree with david that this was a very cute idea. I liked the idea of this brother writing home to tell his sibling ...

Okay. I read this excerpt this morning and I enjoyed it and then I went about my day, but now in the late afternoon (in the middle of my English ...

jumpingsheep here! Happy review day! First, I really enjoyed how you described the Victorian setting though imagery and Eva's inner thoughts. It felt realistic to me and I found Eva's ...

Happy Review Day! Jumpingsheep here for a review! First of all, I enjoyed how you characterized VP and the narrator through their interactions and dialogue. I thought that their characters ...

Hello! First of all, kudos to you for writing in the historical fiction genre. It can be a tricky genre to work in and I think you managed it well! ...

Hello! jumpingsheep here! I thought that the topic you chose for this article was extremely intriguing. I'll be a college student next year and I found this piece to be ...

This poem literally sums up my thoughts exactly! The concept of rediscovery during teenage years is one that I can relate to. Some things that I noticed: --The periods at ...

This is a really nice article! My friends and I were just talking about sleep paralysis the other day, and my friend get's it often. I like how you broke ...

Happy review day!! I just started joining storybooks a few months ago, and when I saw this title, I just had to check it out. I thought it was really ...

jumping sheep here! This is super cool! I've never seen anything really like this before! I'm not sure if there's suppose to be an order to this poem, or if ...

Hi! jumpingsheep here! This is a wicked intriguing beginning! I like the details you included, and how you managed to characterize your main character in such few words. Them recalling ...

Aw man! That description of the zeppelin sounds super rad! I'm so excited to learn more about it in the next chapter! It's jumpingsheep here for another review! I think ...