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The very first thing that I noticed that bothered me was in the first line: "... what we could of had." You were looking for could hace or could've. I ...

This was an enjoyable poem to read. I enjoyed your repetition and emphasis on dreams, but I will agree that the structure was a little confusing. Other than that, I ...

Let me start by saying that this poem really was good, so don't let anything that I mention in this comment mitigate that fact. Okay, well, one thing that kind ...

Now this is simply amazing! I can't tell you how much I loved it! :D The vocabulary was fantastic, the structure was amazing, and I fell madly in love with ...

Good piece. It summarized the series very well, and I think this would be a good crash course for those newbies to the world of Harry Potter. So, congratulations on ...

This was a good poem. Be careful to avoid singular conjugation of verbs involving more than one thing, though. Other than that, I found nothing too in need of correction. ...

Excellent poem. It has a lot of depth to it, and that's something that I really appreciate. I loved the misery that was conveyed at the duties of a mother/ ...

I loved this piece! It had a very Kate Chopin- Awakening feel to it, and seeing as that is one of my favorite pieces of literature, you can guess just ...

This was a good poem, although it seemed a tad bit choppy. Otherwise, I loved it. ;D I absolutely love reading Harry Potter as I have grown up with it ...

Well, I'll agree that writing is something you can do right! One of many by the sound of it! I can't describe how much I enjoyed reading this poem, as ...

aaagghhhhh, I absolutely love this piece (it kind of epitomizes me). Probably my favorite of all of your pieces! :D It conveys human independence and the fear of relying on ...

As I've told you before, I'm in love with this piece! :D All of it seemed to come from a vault of emotion buried deep within you and nothing seemed ...

I found this piece to be absolutely amazing! I will agree that I would like to see a tad more detail, however that's not to take anything away from the ...

Absolutely wonderful piece! It may sound stupid to say so, but it sort of had a "Pride and Prejudice"/ "Wuthering Heights" feel to it (which is why I loved it ...

Had you not said so, I never would have guessed that this was someone's first attempt at writing poetry. It was simply beautiful! I, personally, had no problem with the ...