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jordynlp03

  • Poetry » Satire, Culture Re: When the Cool Kids Come Knocking at My Door

    Hey it's Jordyn! If i could only describe this poem in one word it would be "preach!" I am going to expand on why I agree with you so much ...

    Mar 27, 2017
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Mutual Insanity

    First of all, This poem was magnificent. Not only did you talk about your feelings for this unknown girl but you demonstrate how wonderful it would be to have a ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: How to Girl

    My first thought was "Wow, this is so relatable!" Not only that but the word choices were fantastic. A few of your lines were: "Your uniform will be anything that ...

    Dec 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: You're Safe, You're Sound

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It captured the ways that many people including myself feel almost daily. People and words can hurt but we just have to remember that ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: please God

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It captured the ways that many people including myself feel almost daily. People and words can hurt but we just have to remember that ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: So Alone

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It captured the ways that many people including myself feel almost daily. People and words can hurt but we just have to remember that ...

    Dec 13, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Dramatic Re: a broken piece of art

    I really enjoyed reading this poem. It captured the ways that many people including myself feel almost daily. People and words can hurt but we just have to remember that ...

    Dec 13, 2016


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