jolene15

This poem is great. I can relate to this other then my dad is not dead just has been in my life off in on throughout me growing up. I ...

Something new is about to begin While all that you know will come to an end Wind is rushing through the trees Bringing the scent of old memories Then the ...

I really enjoyed reading this but have a thing I would like to put out there instead of it like this... Have you seen the detective? This case has not ...

There it was—the most beautiful thing a seven-year-old boy could lay eyes on. It was about as big as the nickel resting in his pocket—that is, if said nickel was ...

I enjoyed reading this but got stuck on a few things like she never replies at anyone not even to her own children I think what you mean is she ...

I enjoyed reading it but I do have a few idea how you could make it better. Instead of saying When I hear a country song,One thought comes in my ...

I like it its very good. Well, I don't meant to be rude, But I've not been reviewed. I think it's rather unfair. It's quite a cause to despair. Please, ...

This is a very amazing poem but i would change the way you layer it. she stands in front of the mirror She is naked She is scared She is ...

I was kinda confused on the poem but its good. I didn't really understand this part-----I am an idiot because if I wasn't, you'd leave. I am coarse because I ...

I like it but this part kinda confused me with the second I...I can speak but I don't have a voice I can sleep but I don't have dreams...I think ...