jojo48

Well, if you want to know whether you're a good writer or not, you came to the right site. I think that's what everyone here wants to know. FYI, I'm ...

Welcome to the site! That was fairly good for your first post, but there are a few definate things you could change. First off, this could be a great story, ...

That was an amazing begining! It was perfect, and I really want to read more. I really can't think of anything wrong with it. Your long-term imagery about being at ...

Okay, I can see where you were coming from with this, but altogether this wasn't really a poem. It was more like a simple story with no feeling. You were ...

I agree with the hippie dude. War trenches and battlefields aren't the most appetizing settings to start a story with. I don't mind a war scene later on in a ...

Short and sweet. That was really nice and flowing. I'm guessing it means you help this person when they're in need. I don't have anything to say, except maybe you ...

I love that poem! Lord of the Rings is my favorite series on earth (besides Narnia). There weren't any formating or gramatical errors that I could see. Maybe you could ...

Now that was true prose. Whoever said big words weren't the only thing you needed? Well, they're not, but in your case, that was extriordinary! I agree with the last ...

Very vivid descriptions. I could tell that if I was watching a movie I'd be freaked out. You've definately got a unique writing style - in a good way! There ...

That was really well written. Especially the part about the "nearly consumed cookie". Similies always sound good no matter what context their in. I think that's my motto. Anyway, I ...

That was a beautiful narrative poem. I could really feel the desperation and confusion that comes from retreating into yourself (if that's what you were portraying). I like how you ...

I'm probably not the best person to reply to a college essay, but I wanted to say something to this because I thought it was really well done. I've always ...

This was a great piece of writing. The best part was how perfectly you described the feeling. I could imagine everything. There were a few grammatical and formating errors like ...

Wow, Talulahbelle (if I spelled that right). I really loved that story! I want to hear more! I'll tell you what made it so great. October is such a unique ...

I thought that was nicely done. I've always been a fan of substituting phrazes and words like "mauve" instead of "red". I know mauve's not really red, but you get ...