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Re: Writers KrazyWriter And Chanta1234.... What Happened It's Being Worked On
You've got something really good going here, I just have a few nitpicks. You've got some punctuation that is out of place in this, for example, the very first comma ...
Dec 20, 2014 -
Re: Oh, my dear little sister
Hey there, joallover here for a funtastic review! First of all, I love the imagery here. For your first song, it really is quite good. It probably would be better ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Not the Same
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I have to ask, what is up with all the break up/ just plain ...
Mar 31, 2014 -
Re: Still Kissing.
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I love taking old thoughts and putting it into poems :) What you've written ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: The Lust of Darkness
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I liked what you tried in this. I do think, though, that it could ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Your Sofa
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! I like the description in this. You wrote out the event very poetically and ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: An Exception
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! This was a nicely written poem, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Usually, I can't ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: My heart has a heart and it's broken
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! You have done a wonderful job with this, it is really well written. I ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: (late) Valentine's day poem
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Oh :( this breaks my heart. You sound like I did before I found ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Something a father shouldn't do
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! You did awesome at this! I don't know if this is completely your story ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Mom
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! This is a poem that everyone with a mother can relate to. Mothers are ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Perfection
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! Well, I have opinions on this. I feel like you hit the nail right ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Tile
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! That is quite the comparison. I can imagine you trying to think of the ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: That Which Scars Me Every-time.
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! This is very personal and powerful. Exceptionally written too. Of course, though, it is ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Seven signs of insanity
Hey there! joallover here for a review on this wonderful Review Day for team Mazarine Marauders! This is scary. I guess I used to be insane, I fit into everyone ...
Mar 30, 2014