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Wow. Thats all I can say. runawaythoughts was wrong to be so rude but I don't think he ment to be harsh. Well, I can't wait to read more. This ...

I like this but I think it could have been alittle longer. I agree with what HollieWood said. You told us what we already new about Bella. Over all it ...

Very nice although I was disappointed with the length of it. My mind was anticipating more than what was written. Maybe another stanza or two to gradually lead the poem ...

Alittle confusing but I think it is good. You show your knowledge for physics xD Not too bad.

Loved this poem. Reminds me of the book Twilight in a way. Very nice.

This made me think of my ex... Oh boy here come the tears.. Good poem though.... *sniffle*

soooo cute i really like this poem. adorable. happy writting!

Very nice. I like the fact its from a dogs point of view.\It made me want to keep reading. Love it. You should def do more pieces like this. :]

Very nice work I agree with the first poster but if your teacher likes that then keep it that way. xD

Ooo! Very cute but deep writting. I think you should somewhat elaborate(sp?) on your thoughts. Maybe make it alittle longer? Good start. :]

Very nice work :]

I like the subject but I think you should expand on your ideas for this piece. Make it alittle more detailed as well. Good start. :] Keep working on this.

I can relate to this. It sorta reminds me of something that happened to me. Nice wording too. Short and sweet.

Beautiful choice of words. It really makes me think, Its beautiful. :]

Your words confuse me. Maybe it would be more helpful if you revised again. I love the idea though. :]