jamesMarcus

That was very well written! I really appreciate young talent and that is why i appreciate you'r style of writing. At this age you usually develop you'r skills or at ...

An excellent plot! i enjoyed the idea extremely and am curious to know what happens next. I must say not a typical mind at all yet very unique. To read ...

yeah a good read! this defines skill of how a poet can rhyme on the spot! well i'll give you a thumbs up on this! it is entertaining and i'll ...

yes it definitely brings the scene in my mind. it was a well defined descriptive piece and please don't make it so typical. vampire stories are as typical as teenage ...

well Tyler i have to say well done on the description and the expression. ...though i am confused why you wrote it from a girl's point of view. not that ...

hello! james here to review. lets see. ok i accept the story as a good read but i feel it as if its incomplete. i mean you left the reader ...

wow, not a bad idea. i'm sorry but this is my first time viewing a part of your novel. try a different expression because in the back of my mind ...

......i really don't know what to say! that was really cute...i suppose for your age and i think you can improve because what you label you'r poem as must be ...

well i certainly was involved in it! i think you have a good mind map that would lead you further in this story and what i like about writers is ...

hi! well you certainly asked for a review and here it is. i think the poem is well constructed and yet has a touch of evil in it. you have ...

wow, you already have so many reviews what do you need my point of view for! any way since you asked it, i should probably give it! a very natural, ...

hello i am James and here to go through this poetry of you'rs ! okay Captian Random i think it was a very touchy poem and thought full. you have ...

hello i am here to review! it was a wonderful combination of cooking and dancing. i think you need to high light the characters personality more. as in you have ...

hello i'm James! Okay so even though your work is good i would just like to say that you'r wrong. parents would never do that and think of their child ...

hey king! okay so i suppose first to review here. all right i thought the poem was dramatic and good. it had a nice theme with emotional thing between the ...