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ivyLeonora

  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Boxes

    I love the whole concept of how you've managed to portray hearts as boxes. "Everyone’s heart is a box Metal, cardboard, and wooden Some are soft and some are hard ...

    Jun 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'm a Little Writer

    It's short and sweet. You know the saying, "Good things come in small packages." well that is the case for this poem. It's short and simple and i think it ...

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Fire

    It's a very short poem, but the length leaves me wanting more. The poem is really in the zone, right on point, so it's eay for th e reader to ...

    May 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Lovesick

    i really enjoyed reading LOVESICK, as i think it could rally relate to a teenage girl's life. Sometimes, we just don't know what to do when it comes to love. ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Mystic Violet

    AWWWWWW. ;) i find this poem seriously sweet. i wonder though if you've ever used it to win a girl over, because in my eyes it would totally work. But ...

    May 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Happiness

    the whole persona and idea that happinesqs is an illusion and does not exist, really intrigued me.When people write about happiness, they often tell people the positive sides of what ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Night Owl

    this beautiful poem takes me to a whole other world. the way in which the words are painted leaves a magnificent picture in my mind. it talks in detail about ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Literature, Literature Re: Innocence

    I think this poem puts eveeryone into a nostalgic moment. Everyone has to grow up and everyone has to move on and develop from their own ways. Its sort of ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sadistic games.

    This poem is strangely moving for me and i feel that the title is very good. i saw it among the other poems and it had this certain allure that ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: Purpose

    "The Fire in his heart that has been extinguished The Light in his mind that has been Relinquished" i particularly liked this stanza in the poem as itreally conveyed the ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Insanity

    WoW. That's what i thought about your poem. The whole thing brought me into a different world. i felt trapped in myself, just reading it. This poem is dripping with ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: The Narcissus Boutique

    i thorougly enjoyed this poem tremendously. The Narcissus Boutique is very humorous and it was really clever how you got everything to rhyme and make sense! i really pictured your ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: My Lullaby

    The repition is really effective. I can imagine it being read or sung to a young child, helping them fall asleep, so well done. What i love the most is ...

    May 26, 2013


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