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Ugh gotta hate/love unrequited love. This poem hit so hard and its so relatable to a lot of young people. When you fall in love for the first time it's ...

Hello @mellifera! A quick review for you. First off, I love your writing. Its fast paced and engaging and I can't wait to read the rest. I'm not sure what ...

First off really cute poem. It's so relatable I can't even. The enthusiasm and nervousness of the sender is so prevalent, feel like they are really young and haven't had ...

This was such a sweet little narrative. I think you captured the beautiful effortlessness of childhood, and the wild abandon of youthful energy that comes along with it. I love ...

I love how descriptive this poem is and how well the poem is structured l. It flows so well. I particularly liked the line "The chilled metal too warped for ...

Hello F0x! A quick review for you. I like the beginning of this poem, its very relatable to me. 'As I sit here on my own / I think it's ...

I really like this poem, it reminds me of ehrn life was so much simpler and you didn't have to worry so much. I don't really have that much to ...

I can really relate to this and I hope you're feeling better 😊. Besides obvious punctuation and grammar, I really like the flow of this poem. "One minute mad because ...

I'm going to review this bit by bit but over all, I really liked it. First I like how you grab the readers attention with an action. "As I open ...