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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: To Win Your Hand Chapter 1.1

    Hello, Alexa! This is a great piece, and I had a lot of fun reading it. Right from the first sentence, I was hooked- excellent, almost poetic first sentence, nice ...

    Jan 2, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Falling

    Hi, Caitlynn! This is a great poem! I love how the simplicity of the poem conveys such a powerful meaning. I think your message is very universal. Props to you ...

    Dec 17, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: November 30th

    Hi, Clancy! This is a gripping poem. I love your descriptions, they allow me to picture the terror of the earthquake (I hope you Alaskans are doing okay). I especially ...

    Dec 6, 2018
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Broken

    Hi, Bellarke! I really like this poem! I especially enjoy your use of figurative language throughout the piece- "Storm inside of me," "Always moving in slow motion," "Everything was frozen," ...

    Dec 5, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Should've Asked

    Hi, Vagrant! I really like this poem. I relate to this on a spiritual level :( Your poem is very honest and from the heart. Interpretation: I interpreted this to ...

    Dec 4, 2018
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Alvarado

    This is a great story! Your descriptions are very vivid, and your writing is humorous without being over-the-top for your genre. Here are some parts that stuck out to me: ...

    Dec 4, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Breaking Waves

    Hi! I love this poem, the formatting is very original. I especially like how it's reminiscent of the crashing and receding of waves. I interpreted it to be about feeling ...

    Dec 4, 2018
  • Lyrics » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Memoirs

    Hi! This is a good start for a song! I totally get the feeling of not wanting to forget good memories, especially those about a friend. I do have some ...

    Dec 3, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hurt

    This is a nice poem! It's simple, but it really speaks out. (Congrats on your first piece, by the way.) I especially like the final line, because it ends on ...

    Dec 3, 2018
  • Short Story » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: A Small Town Near the Great Lakes

    Hi! I think this is a nice story. I like the cliffhanger ending, and one can only assume that the narrator's life was rocked by this scandal. However, I do ...

    Dec 3, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: What Remains

    Holy crap. This story is incredible. Your descriptions are so beautiful and poetic, and make me see pictures in my head. From the very first sentence, I was drawn into ...

    Dec 3, 2018
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Science Re: Synesthesia Narrative Draft (will add more later)

    Wow! I'm jealous. Even though I don't have synthesia, this piece made me vividly imagine what it's like. (I hope my piano playing and singing doesn't bring any synesthetes pain.) ...

    Dec 2, 2018


Poetry is the art of creating imaginary gardens with real toads.
— Marianne Moore