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Re: To Win Your Hand Chapter 1.1
Hello, Alexa! This is a great piece, and I had a lot of fun reading it. Right from the first sentence, I was hooked- excellent, almost poetic first sentence, nice ...
Jan 2, 2019 -
Re: Falling
Hi, Caitlynn! This is a great poem! I love how the simplicity of the poem conveys such a powerful meaning. I think your message is very universal. Props to you ...
Dec 17, 2018 -
Re: November 30th
Hi, Clancy! This is a gripping poem. I love your descriptions, they allow me to picture the terror of the earthquake (I hope you Alaskans are doing okay). I especially ...
Dec 6, 2018 -
Re: Broken
Hi, Bellarke! I really like this poem! I especially enjoy your use of figurative language throughout the piece- "Storm inside of me," "Always moving in slow motion," "Everything was frozen," ...
Dec 5, 2018 -
Re: Should've Asked
Hi, Vagrant! I really like this poem. I relate to this on a spiritual level :( Your poem is very honest and from the heart. Interpretation: I interpreted this to ...
Dec 4, 2018 -
Re: Alvarado
This is a great story! Your descriptions are very vivid, and your writing is humorous without being over-the-top for your genre. Here are some parts that stuck out to me: ...
Dec 4, 2018 -
Re: Breaking Waves
Hi! I love this poem, the formatting is very original. I especially like how it's reminiscent of the crashing and receding of waves. I interpreted it to be about feeling ...
Dec 4, 2018 -
Re: Memoirs
Hi! This is a good start for a song! I totally get the feeling of not wanting to forget good memories, especially those about a friend. I do have some ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: Hurt
This is a nice poem! It's simple, but it really speaks out. (Congrats on your first piece, by the way.) I especially like the final line, because it ends on ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: A Small Town Near the Great Lakes
Hi! I think this is a nice story. I like the cliffhanger ending, and one can only assume that the narrator's life was rocked by this scandal. However, I do ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: What Remains
Holy crap. This story is incredible. Your descriptions are so beautiful and poetic, and make me see pictures in my head. From the very first sentence, I was drawn into ...
Dec 3, 2018 -
Re: Synesthesia Narrative Draft (will add more later)
Wow! I'm jealous. Even though I don't have synthesia, this piece made me vividly imagine what it's like. (I hope my piano playing and singing doesn't bring any synesthetes pain.) ...
Dec 2, 2018
