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Glistening eyes and bemused glances, Are small clues toward my hidden secret. You had your fair shake, but missed the threshold, To memories that could have been. I like this ...

The repetition is perfect. I love the way you don't just paint an image. Instead it felt like you were pouring the image out so gracefully but at the same ...

Good poem! I think you lost some of your flow and consistency in the middle of it unfortunately. I also don't understand what you were attempting to achieve by having ...

Wow! I totally overlooked this poem but it's fantastic! So stylized and full of tone. I love the careful word choice and the (intentional?) lack of grammar/punctuation. This poem made ...

Very pure thoughts, I enjoyed reading it. :) I like the rhyme scheme and just the genuineness of it all. Anti-semitism is completely ignorant and I really do feel sorry ...

Phew, let me take a moment to breath. :p That poem was definitely a mouthful but that doesn't make it bad. The only thing that worries me is that it ...

Besides some errors I noticed and awkwardness of your format I'd say that it was a pretty good poem. I can see more potential if you spent more time on ...

I absolutely love the contrasting poems! It's quite apparent your not an atheist, and I'll let you know that it's nothing like what you said so don't let people tell ...

You know I've always admired the poetic qualities of masks! Your poem is very full and deserves a second read. I would recommend adding a little more punctuation in some ...