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It's more frowned upon in Malland than anywhere else. In Asha's culture, it's just a thing, and in Yuni's there's probably some cultural significance that I should probably go into ...

This is the ending, but I will admit that I struggled especially with ending it, so it's definitely subject to change. I'd like to edit this in the near future, ...

I'm actually going to be taking two classes over the summer as a sort of writing summer camp thing, one on noveling and one on dialogue! Hopefully I can bring ...

that seems ominous...

Sorry for the very belated reply, but I think that I meant that she had never seen the animal in her life. I'll try to clear that up in the ...

Is English your first language?

Thanks for the review! I'm really proud of my progress as a poet (I just found out I won an award for a poem I entered in a competition!). It's ...

I'm glad that you interpreted the poem the way you did. It's difficult to see what I wrote as an eating disorder be trivialized as a failed diet. Thank you ...

No problem! I'm happy I helped.

In that case, I wouldn%u2019t use filler words for curse words because it makes them seem less serious in a way. Writing around them might be a better option.

There is no human narrator for this poem, therefore I found that keeping the imagery to only things a human would be able to notice unnecessary. I don't feel as ...

Write more poetry

February is the second month (2) and Tuesday was born on February 22nd or 2/22

no problem!

it's not a bad thing, but I do agree that you should do more with it.