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Hey, rosette! Storm here for another review, so let's get to it. Someone was knocking on the door. Very lightly, as if they didn't want to disturb the sleeping household. ...

Hey, rosette! Ink here for a review, so let's get into it! I thought I heard a chuckle. "It's only Al, son. It's only Al." I think that you should ...

Hey, GrayButterfly! Ink here for a review, so let's get right into it! Musty air fluttered around Axel’s vision. This is the second time you've mentioned Axel, and you have ...

Hey rosette! Ink here for a review, so let's get to it! It took me a bit of thinking to pinpoint what bothered me about your first few sentences after ...

Hey, Lare! Ink here to beat the tar outta Kayla, Adri, and Hatt! Here's to hoping I can do this story some justice! In only three paragraphs, I'm already feeling ...

Hey, Tortwag! Ink here for a review this wonderful Review Day! (this also happens to be my 200th review!) Let's get to it! And the field around them forced the ...

Yo Hatt! How's it feel to see me doing you a favor while simultaneously rubbing your nose in the fact that I'm in the lead? Oh well. Happy Review Day, ...

Hey, silverhanded! Ink here to write a review for the Blueberries! (and also to grind @Kays, @Evander, and @Hattable into the dirt!). Here it goes! knife slip cut in the ...

Hey, Lare! Ink back for a follow-up review, so let's get another review in for the Blueberries! Nitpicks: He sat at the dining room table, snacking on home fries and ...

Hey, Lare! Ink here for a review on Review Day, so let's get into it! Style Nitpicks: The Thrainsson family farmhouse was fifteen long miles away from civilization, surrounded by ...

Hey, Amira! Happy Review Day! Ink here for a review, so let's get right into it! I am going to be frank. I saw almost no rhyme or reason in ...

Hey, CocoaCat. We didn't exactly leave off on the right foot, but I hope that you can accept my criticism with grace and respect. Happy Review Day! And her name, ...

Hey, mackmack101! Ink here for a review, so let's get into it! I'll preface this by saying that I consider myself a Democrat (at least, that's what I'll register as ...

Hey, RoyalsHighness! Ink here for a review, so let's jump right in. Overall, I liked your poem. I think you did well within the rhyme scheme, and to me, at ...

Hey, rosette! Ink here for a startlingly timely review, so let's get into it! The air outside was cool, clearing my head, and cooling my sweating hands. The use of ...