Hey, it's RedWingsBlueSky with a review for you! I like this a lot. The wording is extremely intriguing, like its pulling you in. I honestly don't have a whole lot of suggestions to make, because I absolutely love this. The one thing I can think of is that the first stanza doesn't make very much sense in comparison with the others. I wish I could think of more to say, but there just isn't that much to fix. Oh, and this is pure genius "the filament in forever burns out quickly" Alright, that's all I have to say. Thank you.
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