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This is a very passionate article, and though I can't relate to those experiences, I am now more acknowledged in what goes on. I wasn't able to read the whole ...

This is a pretty cool theme of nature and life and how they pack together to stop the forest from being destroyed. However, maybe remember to capitalise your sentences: One ...

This is really reflective poetry, in some ways, morbid but beautiful. It really made me think of the value of friendship. I loved the line 'when she didn't get even ...

This has changed so dramatically since a few chapters ago. You have put a lot of good detail and information so it's composed really well. 'Whenever Marie opens a book, ...

This is packed with so much beautiful imagery- I just love the line 'mourning their long lost green leaves'. There are so many lines in this poem that are so ...

This is such an awesome piece of work. I love the sarcasm in it and the way that you have expressed their train of thought. The piece moves swiftly and ...

This is so cool- I have to do Seneca and Quizlet as well at school. I loved this piece, not only because of that but because it's so relatable. I ...

I love this piece because you have described vividly how consciousness and shock and instinct can not only be the difference between life and death, but can tell the truth ...

Each chapter is getting more descriptive. You have made the story flow easily and effectively. I also love the dialogue and the reactions. Does her father do anything to stop ...

I definitely want to see more of this, it's a storyline that can go far. You have put the description in vividly, and the piece flows very easily yet has ...

This was very well composed, I loved your sentence structures and the way you arranged your paragraphs. I also love the way that you have also talked about Claire, and ...

I love the concept of zombie apocalypse, I've always dreamed to myself what I would do in that situation. I also loved your starting sentence because the main character has ...

You have done really well with the detail in the dialogue and the dialogue that has been said. Within the first line 'What's written there? Nothing.' Perhaps you could make ...

This is so heart-warming, the repetition was effective and beautiful and the theme of the poem is so true. Unfortunately, we live in a world where people push others down. ...

This is such beautiful poetry, with such an important message as well. I love the last two lines 'these tears are costless, crying is worthless' because they perfectly illustrate how ...