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I really like the abstract meaning of this poem. You get lost in this image of struggle and hardship, happiness and generosity and then you are brought back by the ...

This poem is very creative and abstract. Instead of the narrator longing for paradise, they are already there however they don't know what to make of it. That feeling of ...

You have really good lines in here, and you have done some great world-building as well. I also love the way it is set in 2022 however reminds me of ...

This was beautifully written. No names or identities, but simply metaphors and smiles and expressions. Just referring to your new friend as 'you' in a way indicates the main character's ...

I'm so interested in this storyline and what will happen when they are faced with the dragon. Additionally, the characters are becoming more distinct and individual. I'm starting to feel ...

Wow, these boys are horrible! I'm looking forward to reading about them when you publish your story. Could you perhaps maybe show not tell? With this line: 'Yussif got punished ...

Just like the other poem, I adored the emotion in this. It really does express how life changes from one thing to another. There is already so much story in ...

This is a really metaphorical story. It's very abstract and mysterious, and I think that you could make a real story from this. I love the way that you have ...

This was wonderfully composed- at first it seems to be about loss, and then gradually it becomes a story of having a broken-heart and being betrayed by the one that ...

I love the thoughts and the story in this piece of writing, you have been able to reach out for the audience using personal thoughts to give a brief summary ...

This poem really put emphasis on many issues that people face to this day. It shows that many things contribute to addiction, self- denial, and hatred and the way that ...

This was such a nice review of YWS. I can totally relate to the Grows and the Glows, and I too feel the same way. It's awesome to know that ...

This poetry sounds so nice when said, and flows so elegantly. My favourite line was: 'One night, she did not return, and my aching heart began to yearn for the ...

I personally love Stars in the Dark, I thought that that was really beautiful and something that would be read with interest and peaceful thoughts. I also loved Sakura, it's ...

This is very well informed essay with a lot of references and terms which is effective in persuading the reader and getting across your point. However, could you add more ...