Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Okay...a very short story but quite dense in some of the heavy stuff its got casually mentioned down there...well it was interesting to say the least, I'll break things down in more detail down below.
Anyway let's get right to it,
There were two young boys in the village that came from two different families but best friend’s known for their troubles.
Well...there are always a couple of boys like that in every village I suppose, or at least that's what I've seen myself over the years...well this is already going in a pretty funny direction so lets see where it all ends up going.
Dalla and Yussif were class mates and best friends at Primary School class 3, they were known for making noise in class and also coming to school late.
Alright that's normal enough stuff for them to be doing, them being best friends like that is also fairly typical of such situations but let's see if this gets any worse than that...pretty short story you have here so its tough to see where the plot of this is going.
Yussif got punished for touching the butt of their class teacher who looks beautiful and sexy as noted by her fellow teachers (All eyes on Yussif and the madam 👀).
Okay...that is really bad though...this took a turn to be very very worse all of a sudden, did not see that coming. Umm...so this is a really touchy subject to write about, I won't say this doesn't happen, it totally does but its just rare and also pretty hard to write about without backlash so be careful is what I would say.
Yussif started being a changed boy after he was punished to dig a hole. Dalla who also got lashed for being to school late, targeted a stone into the eye of the teacher that lashed him as a revenge.
Wow those are some super extreme punishments, I doubt that too many schools would allow this sort of thing these days and again very touchy subjects to write about so be careful.
They were feared in school for their troubles , and finally got kicked out of school.
Dalla and Yussif’s exciting life story begins after being dropped out of school.
Getting kicked out of school is definitely the one thing that will certainly happen...oh well...that's kind of how it goes anyway. Umm...well...let's see what their story is I suppose, it should be fairly interesting...if a touch on the sensitive side if you portray any of those sensitive topics in detail.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall this is an interesting concept, could make for a really interesting story but has to be handled really careful. I wish you good luck.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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