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lol, i was not expecting that. it was dark, painfully detailed and emotional. well done. there are some things that make one question the right and natures laws of living ...

Hola! I love how we ended up starting this back and forth thing. I really liked this one. it was surrender and had a different taste of what death is ...

Hi. Illi here. As the first story I have read form you and the newest you have posted, i feel like i am cheating by not reading an older one. ...

aww, so sweet. obsessive much. this reminds me of my own story, the same at different at the same time. it was easy to tell that he was dead in ...

i love the idea for this. its short and filled with emotion. you gave a just of the setting but more would have been better. what did that world look ...

REVIEW TIME :) okay this sounds like a dance of some sort in a high school. the attention to the sound and ignoring the rest that is around you is ...

i like this. the flow is nice and the tone is there. i never thought about my writing style being reflected by my state of mind before. its a very ...

your rhyming is strange and hard to keep up with. try to find a rhythm to the poem. i like the idea, just there's no beat to it. it doesn't ...

its easy to read, short, simple and emotional. well done. few words to sum up the innermost feelings of someone that feels left out, alone and secluded from the rest. ...

this is a good version of the eyes of the one that created jack the ripper. there is a London novel that you should read. its called Perfume and it ...

It works for the randomness. its a challenge i wouldn't accept. just seems like too much work but you did brilliantly. you really made the image clear and the description ...

laughing out loud cracking in my joints them you wont mind if i rant so that i can get at least 25 more points. :). the reviews are difficult as ...

It was dark, emotionally depressing and had a bit of death to it. I liked it as one that also writes things like this but in fantasy stories. the story ...

YAY a vamp zombie death question poem. or is it worse? I like it. it reminds me ot the movie worm bodies and the book Demonica from Darren shan. I ...

I want a Leaf now. It would be wonderful to wake up with a dragon as a pet. then i think about the movie "how to train your dragon" and ...