Published March 24, 2013
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Sometimes I want to scream
To rip at the seam
With every hot tear
My heart begins to sear
All the dreams shatter
It doesn't even matter
Who will care
If I no longer share
Each paper will rip
The glass will begin to tip
And clash on the ground
In my head, pound
Rough edges
Neighbors staring through the hedges
Now I am alone
I will never be known
More and more anger
Thoughts still linger
Most of me leaves
Stolen by thieves
Because life is to hard
To listen to every shard
it's very emotional............... Good job !
its easy to read, short, simple and emotional. well done. few words to sum up the innermost feelings of someone that feels left out, alone and secluded from the rest. very nice. this is like the inside of ever teenager ever at some point of high school. keep up the good work.