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Hi tammy777! Happy review day! I enjoyed the poem! I really liked the imagery, especially the flowers blooming with mourning song. The first half went quite smoothly but I felt ...

This story makes me sad. It reminds me of a friend I used to have. Is this about someone that you know? Onto the review: I know that this is ...

Hey there Arthur! I enjoyed reading your poem. I think it conveyed the feeling well. It made me feel peaceful and it gave me a sense of dazed happiness. After ...

Hi Dracula! Sorry this hasn't gotten out of the green room sooner! Anyway...onto the review! The last line was sweet. It made me smile. Overall, I liked the story! I ...

Hey there Lightsong! I liked your poem and I think it had a really good core message in it! It might just be me, but at some points in the ...

Thanks for liking my poem "Becoming Human"! I enjoyed your poem as well! I really like the line "But human nature prevails over clichés". That stood out to me as ...

Hi sagarisiyal27! Welcome to YWS! Congrats on your first piece! I feel as though you have a great vocabulary and have the ability to write really beautiful, melodic lines of ...

Hi there! Thanks for reviewing my poem "Becoming Human"! Here I am giving you a review back! Let's get started: First thing I noticed was some of the more technical ...

Hi Lordofkittys! I hope you are having a happy 2017 so far! Getting right into it, even in the first paragraph and in certain places within the story, there was ...

Hi Dracula! This review is going to be all nitpicks, seeing as there really were no glaring issues that I saw. Let's get into it: So right off the bat, ...

Overall, I enjoyed this story! I noticed some really strong descriptions and great imagery! One line that caught me off guard was, " Half of them had never drank before, ...

Hi ThePhantomPrince! Happy review day! I apologize if there are other chapters that I haven't read. However getting into the review, the biggest thing that really stood out to me ...

Hi CateRose17, I really enjoyed your short story. I really enjoyed the fact that this was such an original concept, I have never really read anything that expresses the main ...

Hi UnlikelyWriter02! Honestly, your story isn't complete trash at all. I've seen much worse. As you write more you are naturally going to get better, because you get older and ...

Hello TheLearningWriter! I'm seriously enjoying your chapters so far, I don't know, they just always seem so real! Claret is showing a different side of her now, she isn't a ...