iQuippie

Gah! Did you have to ruin the whole thing with the title "Halloween"?! *grumbles* I loved the content, and I almost didn't read it because of the name... well, what ...

O.o What the...?

Hello everyone. I'm in the process of fixing it up right now. There are a lot of errors and stuff though, and it's longer than I remembered... I'll get to ...

XD I loved it. And that's all I have to say about that... --Quippie

Haha! Loved it, it was so funny. victims of a yellow death Does this mean the bus crashes, or it takes them to school and school is boring? that the ...

:D Loved it. Great imagery. I particularly liked the second stanza. Write on. --Quippie

Oh my goshness! How terrifying! *pictures face being blown up*

Stop it, toast! You are so cruel! Now I feel like a fool. Why do you mock me? Tell me, tell! you demonic toast from hell. ^^ THAT was truly ...

*twitch* That was... CRAZY! XD it reminded me of this wicked crazy Japanese kid in my math class... but anyway...

PUNCTUATION, PEOPLE! And that said, I liked the thump thump. =]

I LOOOVE this! I don't have any suggestions. Well... come up with a title. Then I don't have any suggestions. --Quippie

Does anyone else find it a little creepy that she's thinking about her brother that way? :\ Anyway, I guess I liked it... but I cant get over the creepy-ness.

I don't know what to say, except this was one of the coolest poems I have ever read. It was original, your imagery was great... I loved it!! I don't ...

XD That was real cute. I was going to say something about the syllables and that, but it seems you've fixed it in your rewrite. You had wonderful imagery, what ...

*makes big eyes* You are an awesome singer and your lyrics are really cool (but they'd be better if you capitalized your I's. >.