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Hi! Hermione here for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS, and congratulations for submitting such a wonderful first piece! This was a very interesting story. Here are a ...

Hi! Hermione here for a review! Your poem had a good, commonly used message. Overcoming the issue of bullying is something the world has needed to do for a long ...

I think this is a very good start to your story, and I can't wait to read more of it. I myself don't know much about the Philippines, and I'm ...

Hi! Hermione here for a review. First of all, welcome to YWS! This poem of yours was absolutely amazing and beautiful. It made me melt. There were only a few ...

Hello! Hermione here for a review! The description and imagery you used in this poem was amazing. There were only a couple little mistakes I noticed. fed by clothes we ...

Hey! Hermione here for a review. I really enjoyed this poem, and I loved the metaphors you chose to use. My absolute favorite was the one about the rain. It ...

Hi! Hermione here for a review! Your poem was very beautiful with its ending message of hope and for the most part it flowed nicely. I think that your first ...

Hello! I really enjoyed this poem and its concept. I especially liked the part in your last line that read: "...magic is a reality check." It was a powerful ending ...

First of all, you should be confident about your work! While this piece does need a little bit of work, it wasn't all that bad. I really quite enjoyed the ...

Hi there! This is Hermione here for a review. I loved this poem because of your use of such excellent imagery. I could see every scene in my mind clearly, ...

It's amazing how many likes this poem has gotten on this tiny website. 109...It's crazy! Congratulations for that. Since a lot of people have voiced their opinions on this poem ...

Wow. This poem had very few words, but they were each one powerful. The message behind this was very true. Many people tend to live sheltered lives with all the ...

Hey! This is Hermione here with a review. I adored this poem, and it was very relatable. The line that said, "Why do we hide under rocks to bloom?", really ...

Hi! Hermione here for a review! This was an excellent poem. I especially loved your line about the boy saying that "all worlds wounds he would amend." It rolled right ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! Your story sounds very interesting. You've definitely got me hooked and I can't wait to see where you take this. I just a have ...