herbgirl

I like how in this poem you used short little lines. I also like how you seperate the stanzas. I didn't see any spelling mistakes in this poem, so that's ...

I know.

I love the element of rhyme I see in this poem. It is a terribly sad poem, but I must agree, sometimes death just seems easier than life. I have ...

I like this poem. I like how the title and the content match. What the poem says I think is is very cool.But what do I know? Herby

you are wel(come)

thanks!

I was writing kind of fast, so this story might have seemed rushed and mistake ridden.

I was planning on writing other herb girl stories, and in them you'll get a bit more background.

thanks for the reveiw! when I have time, i'll fix those mistakes.

is the hidden message don't blame things on others?

In the last stanza, I think you need a comma. This is a creative poem, but it makes me sad. Why did the flower girl die? Or, did she even ...

Sooooooooooooo funny!! I laughed when I read this the first time. I can see why you wrote this poem. In the middle, that is a very good comment. Why did ...

I really like this one. In your last kind of paragraph it gives a message to people about their own friendships. I also like this poem because it's kind of ...