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  • Poetry » General, General Re: broken

    Thanks for the review. Yeah, I was kind of feeling that way myself, but wanted to wait and see how the reviewers responded. Also, the word "broken" is on two ...

    Aug 4, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: greek toxin

    OH WAIT, I forgot! I also wanted to say I would suggest changing the title. I see how Greek toxins ties in with Socrates, but what does it have to ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Call Me Back (I'm So Lonely)

    Same. In my dreams. Can you still see this? WHAT'S GOING ON????

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Call Me Back (I'm So Lonely)

    Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, but I just thought you would like to know that for some reason I read that entire review in a British ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Pain- Part I

    Hey! herbgirl here for a review here, before I have to go fill out paperwork -__- blah Anyways, I liked this poem. It had a pretty good flow, which is ...

    Jul 25, 2016
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: I Love You

    Oh, I'm so sorry! That makes a lot more sense! Ugh, now I feel like an idiot

    Jun 26, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Midnight Serenades

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    Hi! herbgirl here a review! So, to start, this is really short, so it's a little difficult to review, but it's so beautiful I think you deserve some feedback. That's ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Content

    I'm sorry, but I disagree with you. I think that "Fine" and "Mine" do rhyme, as do "Home" and "Gnomes", "Tree" and "Please". Just because words don't have the same ...

    May 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Midnight Longing

    I usually include punctuation in my poems, I left it out of this one, however, because I found it scrawled in a notebook just like this and wanted to preserve ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Midnight Longing

    Thanks! I normally do have punctuation in my poems, but this one was sort of scrawled in a notebook, so to keep the original format I just typed it out ...

    Apr 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Words in My Mind

    Thanks! This is really helpful!

    Jan 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: HolographicLadybug's Class on Seriousism

    You're right. I can't handle you. XP

    Dec 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Sometimes I Just

    You know, I just published a poem with almost the same name? They're kind of about the same thing, too... Illuminati confirmed!

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What If

    Thanks! I just wanted to explain the last line. I wrote this poem in school in a notebook, and the last line I wrote, then scribbled out. I then showed ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: His name was John

    Oh, that's great!

    Mar 2, 2015


Man is by nature a political animal.
— Aristotle