herb

hey juulman! welcome back to yws! you've done a great job at encapsulating that feeling of watching others fall in love, while you yourself are, to say, "falling behind!" i ...

hey catz! with a lot of poems, it can be hard to cement a good metaphor/comparison for relationships with that of the patriarchy and femininity, but i think you're really ...

hey @user2753994356! welcome to yws, i'm herb, and i'll be reviewing your poem today! with the title, i can definitely see the "tesseract-cality" of this poem-- time being fluid as ...

hi ant! let's unpack this banger of a poem there's a lot of imagery relating to snow, ice, cold things etc. it's really interesting to see that, especially with the ...

hi fig! please excuse any typos during this review, i ak using my phone rn,,, the death of something. you are spectating, surrounding someone, and yet they are no longer ...

hi chi i'm reviewing this, sigh. excuse any typos i am on mobile writing this,,, anothet jade poem! i see you have been thinking about her, interesting. in the past, ...

hi diss (hello, chi) time to review this poem, sigh. wow immediate jade mention! i wonder who this poem is about. anyway, her being your light-- the memory lingering. interesting. ...

hello, hildegardhope. i've come to review this poem. i haven't brushed up on my greek mythology recently, but this is definitely deeply greek-rooted. boyhood to manhood, hm. that is ever-present ...

hello iliketrains666, i'm here to review your poem. it's definitely saying something-- through exauhstion and inability to do something, but i'm not sure what you're trying to say here-- sure, ...

hi lullaby . herb here, to review your poem. immediate notice of pity/loss - pathetic, pay me any attention, drained, notice, margins, fool. you set us (readers) up for a ...

hi @angstyteen. i'm herb, here to review this short story. it's clear that there's the sense of absence, this slow, grieving mourning of our speaker's mother. perhaps it is yours, ...

hi ash! herb here to review your poem. on first glance, this is a piece about love/falling out of love, and you make it akin to clay-- which i found ...

Hi logan! Herb here to review your wonderful piece of poetry~! Let's begin. You keep it sweet and short, and i enjoy that. I think it's very interestingly formatted. it's ...

hello soundo mynd! time to review this last poem in your sisyphean(?) collection, satiety. THAT TITLE THOUGH? stunned from the beginning! let's start :P okay. you start out with the ...

hello taost! i'm herb, here to review your wonderful lyrics :) there's this sense of disappearance, the fleeting-ness of cafe dates, and flowers, is something i find interesting! i almost ...