heavymetal247

Not at all harsh, criticism helps me grow and get better in my writing, which I'm really glad you did :D. And thank you for the advice, sometimes I do ...

Ha ha wow! This is something I've never read. It's so short, yet it's so heart wrenching, the words, the emotion just lures the reader in, and just make them ...

Haha so creative, that's amazing! :D Keep writing!

No problem! :D

thank you for the advice I will definitely look that over. And that would a school video game! :D

than you so much I appreciate it! :D

Thanks! I'm surprised people are actually enjoying the dark writing, they usually think I'm weird at school or something X). And I'm very glad you were engaged it's awesome! Thank ...

Thank you, Im glad someone sees the beautiful side of darkness, it means a lot that you enjoyed this poem, You motivated me to keep writing. Thank you so much! ...

No problem :)

Incredible! It's like you unfolded my entire life. You sit in there observing everyone, they all talk about things you really don't want to talk about. So you're forced to ...

Thanks! :D

No problem :D

Thanks you for the advice it was really helpful! C: Especially to emphasis a question with italics was a great tip, I didn't even know that! I also noticed that ...

Thanks for the advice I'll definitely work on that! I always like to keep the reader engaged, I always fear that the pace may be too slow or boring (my ...

Thank you so much, I was at first a bit worried to post this because of the content, but thank you for reviewing I feel a bit better C:. And ...