Young Writers Society

Migraines are a pain.... especially when there is a lot of noise and light XD any way I think you did an awesome job almost flawless in my opinion, I ...

OOoooooookay! I adore your poem! It's so descriptive and it's easy to imagine, even though you don't give way too much detail, which is amazing! It's descriptive, but the reader ...

Dammit! Why are you so amazing! XD I can't bare the tension anymore, there is even more questions! And little answers haha :D I'm going mad, yet the insane people ...

This is WOW. (That makes no since, but lets go with it XD) Well hello there Bassy here! I'm going to be reviewing your b-e-a-uuuuutiful poem! :D First off, I'm ...

Well like I promised here. Is. My. Review! *In dramatic voice.* And if your wondering, your other writing doesn't have a review because.... they are sooooooo damn amaaaazzzzing (sorry for ...

I never read a piece quite like this, It was beautifully written especially with your advanced description penetrating your every word :D jls1638 got most of the main points, I ...

This poem was so heart wrenching. :D I love how when I read something it make you want to jump into an abyss and never come again, feeling pain and ...

Hey Sherri, Bassy here. Let's review. I really enjoyed this poem it was intriguing, and is weird to say that it was exciting (probably) haha. Anyways I really like the ...

Hello there, Bassy here :D Review time. Perks got most of the mistakes, which there wasn't much. The only mistake I caught that wasn't mentioned was "Turn and face me, ...

I can't describe this at all there are so many words, no. There are no words. Can I just add that all of a sudden I'm really flattered by this ...

Well hello there I'm here to write a review. Jessie filled you in with the important feed back, so since that was already accomplished I will just say that it's ...

Once again a love piece of poetry, you continue to astound me fortis! So far I only see one flaw, it's small "poke it head out" I believe you were ...

I like this, I haven't seen Pokemon in a while though :C. Anyway, it has a lot of dialogue, for the reader to make out each of the characters personality, ...

Hey there! Ready to be reviewed? I will take that as a yes. Okay first things first I adore your characters greatly they are natural and realistic (well their personality ...

Hey there, it's review time from metal friend- sabby. "'After a few weeks, the first part of my plan to revert to a diurnal sleeping pattern had been executed, and ...