hayley10019

Ooh really dark and the imagery wasn't so told that you had no room for imagination. There was plenty room for the reader to image thing and I liked it. ...

Honestly I didn't see much imagery. And I also think it could have been more detailed. More...emotion. It had a lot of emotion in it, but I felt that what ...

I saw nothing wrong at all with the poem and honestly, I can say that I feel the same. That I've been there (am there) and wondering why it takes ...

I can honestly say I really enjoyed this poem. I can't complain about anything and just felt I should comment to tell you how much I liked it. And if ...

I can say that a lot of people would agree and I can say I can also! I liked it, but I have a few pointers or..questions: I see how ...

he opened my eyes opened my thighs kissed me sucked my soul banished my fear bit my ear touched me ate me alive tore out my heart spread me apart ...

Wow... That was really powerful. I liked the word choice... I liked the ending (well.. not like but.. you know). I liked the pattern... I just--- LIKE IT! I could ...

Darkness approaches,as I sink into myself.Deeper and deeper,Under the ocean, in my head...Not blue, but grey.Not sunlit, maybe not even this fake?As a misty, faded old footpathThat had once led ...

Some people might not like it.. but it's probably because they can't realate at all... but I can and I like it.! It's well written.. I like the format.. and ...

Hello there! This was an excellent peice... I saw the story plot.. but I didn't see this particular writing.... as a story. It is a mix between a story, and ...

EloquentDragon wrote: Humph, but these democrats, I gotta tell you something, they are a bunch off…stubborn headed mules if I ever saw em.’ When he says that he is refraining ...

Very good I liked it... Though I will say from experience... Telling or... even hinting to a parent that you are pregnat usually makes you sick... The feeling makes you ...

I agree with the above points and wish not to re-write them all out. But what I want to elaborate more on is the fact offff: There is no natural ...

Hiya! I really liked it. It was very emotional and I liked all the connections you made... But... for the raindrop.. I took it as you (or who ever it ...

Besides you feeling that way, which is terrible, it was a good poem. I like how you incorerated the title with the words, and ryhmed... and it sounded good! I ...