harshita3chaarag

Hey there. So it's good what you've written. It's short and flows well. The only thing I have to point out are two small errors. This is my personal opinion ...

Hey There. Oh My God. All I can say is, I wish I could write like that. Capturing the essence. Getting the reader glued to your piece. Not wanting it ...

Hey There. This is really good. Not too long, but not short either. And the descriptions are perfect. You've expressed the emotions very well, he detachment and alienation.. 'My thoughts ...

Hey There, This is definitely a personal poem, right? I knew it. I had that phase a little while back, and it's become a bit of a constant. Reviewing just ...

Hey There. Frankly, I'm not a Christian. So we don't really celebrate Christmas. Your poem has made me the real feeling of loneliness. It's touched my heart. To be lonely ...

Hey There. This is a really good piece. You've managed to word the emotions that not all of us feel comfortable speaking. My relationship with my mother isn't so good, ...

Hey There. To start off, I think you've done a really good job. It flows really well. And the emotion comes out clearly. And also you've done a wonderful job ...

Hey There. To start off, I think you've done a really good job. It flows really well. And the emotion comes out clearly. And also you've done a wonderful job ...

Hey you. You continue to amaze me with how well you can write. And yes you're right, it is easy to relate to. It just flows so well, and kind ...

Hey there, Honestly I like it. It's interesting. And engaging. The mystery you've kept about exactly what happened to Juliet really keeps the person reading. The thing about her being ...

Hey there. Beginning from the top here. The title itself made me want to read further. A well chose one. *Thumbs-up* Using the word 'Them' is (According to me) a ...

Hey there. Once again you amaze me with how well you write. I could really connect to this piece too. People have different ways of dealing with a crisis. While ...

Hey There. Here to review as you had requested and I promised. Girl, I have one word for you: 'WOW'. You have done an amazing job. It often becomes extremely ...

Hey. How did you do that? I'll be honest in admitting that this is the first palindrome I've read. But I can definitely imagine what a terribly tough task it ...

Hey. So you've written this really well. I mean like really, really well. It flows really well.. The rhythm also just goes along with a sort of tone in my ...