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Hello! Guineapiggirl here to review! I like this piece but there are a lot of things for me to critique as well! :D My favourite verse is this: Have I ...

hullo! Guineapiggirl here to review! Firstly, I need to correct dogs (and you) on one thing. The matter of the whole 'there's' business. It shouldn't be there's. That's abbreviated 'there ...

halloooo! Guineapiggirl here to revieeew! This piece is awesome. Disturbing, but awesome. All except for the last two lines. They feel different to the rest of it; the imagery you ...

HELlOOOOOOOOOOOO! Welcome to YWS, the most awesome place on the internet! Guineapiggirl here to review! I like the first half of this poem. I think it's interesting that you've chosen ...

Hellooooooooooooooooooooooo! It's me again! Here to review, as requested :D This is a nice little piece. I sort of wrote a similar piece to this in my mind about snowflakes ...

Halloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! I reviewed someething of yours a few days ago, I believe! I like this piece better. This is very creepy and good and it makes you sort of think ...

Hello. Soooooo umm... This is a song. Firstly, sort out the lines. It's all in a block and stuff. I don't really get what this song is about. Well, I ...

Hallooo! Guineapiggirl here to review! Firstly, I think this could probably do with some sort of age rating. I know it's not exactly explicit, but it does talk about having ...

Hallloooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Guineapiggirl here to review :D Firstly, I like the plot; a favourite toy who is forgotten as its owner grows older, than loved again. It's been done many times, ...

I love this piece! I reviewed your other piece earlier. It was great, but compared to this! THis is pretty awesome. I actually think you've got some pretty good Biblical ...

Hello! Guineapiggirl here to review! But first, welcome to YWS! Welcome, welcome, welcome to the most awesome place on the internet! Now to your review: The bright fluorescent lights shone ...

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh, interesting. Hello! You're new! Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying yourself here! I'm Guineapiggirl and I'm here to review! So. I think this is quite an interest

Hello! Guineapiggirl here to review! But firstly, welcome, welcome, welcome to YWS! The most awesome place on the internet! I hope you're enjoying yourself here! Now, for your review! This ...

Helloooooooooooooooo! Guineapiggirl here to revieeeeeeeeeeeeeeew! I must say that this short story didn't really interest me much, at all. Sorry to be blunt, but that's that. The plot isn't at ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS, the most awesome place on the internet! I hope you're enjoying yourself on here. I'm Guineapiggirl, and I'm here to give you a review! Well done ...