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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: One lie

    Hi there! I’m Gsp, and I’ll be reviewing you today! I’ll start with any criticism I may have, then say what I liked, and then give you an all-in-all. So ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Just Like Everyday

    Hi, Gsp here, and I’ll be your reviewer today! Or one of them, but you know. Well, let’s jump right in shall we? We’ll start with the things that I ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: I'm gay (But I cry alone at night)

    ... Oh jeez... this is the first poem to actually make me want to cry. I can really tell you wrote this from the heart, and that really moved me. ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sadistic games.

    Hi there! Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! Or one of them, depending. Anyhow, let's get started shall we? But can it really be that funny? This seems ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Girl and the Boy

    Hi there! Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today. Or one of them. Depends. So let's jump right in, shall we? We'll start with the things I noticed that ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: A Flowery Poem.

    Hi there! Gsp here. This is a really nice poem. It's understandable and rather moving, and I really enjoyed the style you used. I only have one or two things ...

    Apr 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: How could you?

    Hi there Yanni, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer for today! I really liked this poem. I like the message it sends, and I'm sure a lot of people ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Rain

    Hey Icy, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! I like this poem, very nice. I would like it if it was longer, but it's nice. I really don't ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Onlooker

    Hi there Amelia, Gsp here! See, I'm reviewing it for you. :) Her tone monotonous, She relates the events Of an uninteresting Saturday Nice beginning, I like it. But you ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows

    Hello there Emanemc! I'm Gsp, and I'll be your reviewer today! This is a really nice poem, I like it. :D I did notice one or two things, though. The ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Perfect Image

    Heya Reality, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! This is a very nice poem, I like the meaning and message behind it, but I did notice a couple ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Lame And Nerdy

    Hey Nerd, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! :D Holy cow. As a Girl Scout myself, I know for a fact that this is absolutely true. I might ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hope

    Heya Bandit, I'm Gsp, and I'm going to be your reviewer today. :D My first advice would be to split this up into separate stanzas. Maybe. I'm not very good ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Time is What Time Was...He Was What He'll Be

    Heya Story, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer for today! Or one of them. I don't know how many other reviews you'll get. But you can be happy knowing ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)

    Hi Priyansha, this is Gsp, and I'll be your reviewer for today! :D I think the title "Wings" is more appropriate, but that's my opinion. Don't feel any need to ...

    Mar 31, 2011


Never express yourself more clearly than you are able to think.
— Niels Bohr