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Re: One lie
Hi there! I’m Gsp, and I’ll be reviewing you today! I’ll start with any criticism I may have, then say what I liked, and then give you an all-in-all. So ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Just Like Everyday
Hi, Gsp here, and I’ll be your reviewer today! Or one of them, but you know. Well, let’s jump right in shall we? We’ll start with the things that I ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: I'm gay (But I cry alone at night)
... Oh jeez... this is the first poem to actually make me want to cry. I can really tell you wrote this from the heart, and that really moved me. ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: Sadistic games.
Hi there! Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! Or one of them, depending. Anyhow, let's get started shall we? But can it really be that funny? This seems ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: A Girl and the Boy
Hi there! Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today. Or one of them. Depends. So let's jump right in, shall we? We'll start with the things I noticed that ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: A Flowery Poem.
Hi there! Gsp here. This is a really nice poem. It's understandable and rather moving, and I really enjoyed the style you used. I only have one or two things ...
Apr 3, 2013 -
Re: How could you?
Hi there Yanni, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer for today! I really liked this poem. I like the message it sends, and I'm sure a lot of people ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: Rain
Hey Icy, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! I like this poem, very nice. I would like it if it was longer, but it's nice. I really don't ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Onlooker
Hi there Amelia, Gsp here! See, I'm reviewing it for you. :) Her tone monotonous, She relates the events Of an uninteresting Saturday Nice beginning, I like it. But you ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: The Place Where the West Wind Blows
Hello there Emanemc! I'm Gsp, and I'll be your reviewer today! This is a really nice poem, I like it. :D I did notice one or two things, though. The ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: A Perfect Image
Heya Reality, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! This is a very nice poem, I like the meaning and message behind it, but I did notice a couple ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Lame And Nerdy
Hey Nerd, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer today! :D Holy cow. As a Girl Scout myself, I know for a fact that this is absolutely true. I might ...
Apr 3, 2011 -
Re: Hope
Heya Bandit, I'm Gsp, and I'm going to be your reviewer today. :D My first advice would be to split this up into separate stanzas. Maybe. I'm not very good ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Time is What Time Was...He Was What He'll Be
Heya Story, Gsp here, and I'll be your reviewer for today! Or one of them. I don't know how many other reviews you'll get. But you can be happy knowing ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Escape (or Wings, which one do you think is better?)
Hi Priyansha, this is Gsp, and I'll be your reviewer for today! :D I think the title "Wings" is more appropriate, but that's my opinion. Don't feel any need to ...
Mar 31, 2011