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Re: Prologue — Kael
Hello ehawthorne! It's gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: I am SO EXCITED to see a fellow romantasy author on here! It's very rare to see people ...
Jul 23 -
Re: Help, I've Fallen Overboard
Hello irusp5890! It's gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Your descriptions are gorgeous; from the view of the forest to the vomiting of ...
Jul 23 -
Re: stardust
Hello Ley! It's gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff -The personification here is beautiful. I really feel like the emotions and experiences of space ...
Sep 14, 2024 -
Re: cherry pie and baking as a labor of love
Hello friend! It's gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This piece is thick with emotion. It isn't complicated; there aren't many fancy words ...
Sep 1, 2024 -
Re: Memories
Hello friend! Hope you're having a wonderful day! Anyway, let's dive in: The Good Stuff - How did you pack so much emotion into this!? This made me feels butterflies, ...
Aug 27, 2024 -
Re: And so love begins to bloom
Hello vampy! I'm here to review your short story. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I think you packed a lot of emotions and a powerful theme within such ...
Aug 27, 2024 -
Re: When I Take a Picture of You (1/3)
The comic? The art? *chef's kiss* this is amazing Toast! The Good Stuff - Your personification of cherry blossoms is beautiful! I haven't seen personification on YWS in a while, ...
Aug 26, 2024 -
Re: Taken(4)
My favorite series isn't dead anymore?! Thank yooou! Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - That was a great ending! It adds ...
Aug 25, 2024 -
Re: The Painting
Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review (and a late welcome to YWS)! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - First off, I can definitely tell that a lot ...
Aug 24, 2024 -
Re: Almost June: Chapter 2
Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I don't exactly know how to describe it, but your writing style is very homey ...
Aug 24, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 4
I'm just binging this entire series now. That's definitely normal. Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! (please write more of this. Not begging; just very desperately asking). Let's ...
Aug 23, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 3
Hello again! I've come to read and review my newest addiction (I really love this series!). Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - The banter in this chapter is MUCH ...
Aug 23, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 2
Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - I think the balance between long and short paragraphs is a lot better here :D ...
Aug 23, 2024 -
Re: skeletons in the closet
Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Your stories always make me want to cry. You have a beautiful type of writing. ...
Aug 23, 2024 -
Re: Garnets on the Asteric Plane - Chapter 1
Hey, it's Gruzinkerbell (formerly serrurie, hehe) here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - Okay, the first paragraph has a nice touch of humor! And what ...
Aug 22, 2024