groganbabygirl

Yo. Grogan here. I like the concept of this poem a lot. Very simplistic. The other reviewers already mentioned the inconsistency of the capitalization of "I". Mankind is one word, ...

Hey. Really understand what you're saying thought this work. You did marvelous expressing your thoughts here! The format is very nice and unique. No qualms with punctuation or spelling. Not ...

Good work here! Totally relatable! The shortness of this piece really makes it effective. It is rather random and choppy in its thought process, although I believe you did that ...

Very interesting subject matter. You did an excellent job with the thought process of a man who is about to die. A couple things- punctuation at the ends of your ...

Alright-- you did a very good job on the poem structure. The sarcastic irony you used very effectively to get the point across. I agree with the previous comment that ...

Hey dannibooklover, This is so touching and so believable. Every believer goes through something like this, and choosing to go to God with your doubts is the right choice. I ...

Hey Sarah! Very inspirational piece. I just found a couple things I would change if it was me. In the second stanza, I would change "the beauty of the dewy ...

Hey Suzette, This poem is honestly so realistic and wonderful. The parallelism is absolutely flawless and really strengthens the message. One little thing: the "You're dreams are," should be "Your ...

Hey atybirdy! I totally understand the heart of this poem! A couple of things here: first, towards the end of the poem, there should be a comma after "Perhaps it'll ...

First, great topic choice-- laughter is something everyone can relate to. The flow itself is a little awkward. In line 7 I would change "strange as the Devil" to "strange ...