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Hi! Grey here to review! I really like what you did with this piece; I wasn't expecting it to go the way that it did. I have two comments for ...

Love the topic! I do have a couple of comments though. Where you say "Long after/everyone I have ever/and will/know," I would add another "ever" after "will". This parallelism, I ...

I like where you went with the constellations; I haven't heard that relation before, so it was an interesting change. Also, the reader can easily understand the feelings behind the ...

Stunning! To be honest, at first I thought this was going to be a bit cliche as the metaphor is commonly used; however, I really like where you took it. ...

First off, this was amazing. I only have one real suggestion for you. You mention how crippling depression can be (and it is), but you don't mention how this is ...

Hi, Grey here to review! I first read this short story when I was in eighth grade, and I loved it. I've loved Poe ever since. That actually brings me ...

I want to say, first, that I completely agree with you. I love the rain. Luckily for me, I live in a place where rain is a regular occurrence year-round. ...

Hi, Blood! Grey here for a little reviewing! First off, I just want to say that I really like what you're saying here. On some level, I think most people ...

This was incredible. Absolutely incredible. You depicted the cruelness of other so well. It was both beautiful and tragic. I read through this twice actually, trying to find some sort ...

Lovely! To be honest (and I don't mean this to be offensive at all), I was a bit hesitant when I first started reading it. The concept has been used ...

Rhiannon! First off, I want to say that I really, really like this (and the inspiration behind it just adds that much more to the effect). I love the last ...

Hi! Grey here to review! First off, I just want to say that this is excellent. From the very beginning, it is intriguing - it really draws the reader in. ...

I find this simply incredible. I'm sure that just about anyone could relate to this in some way or another. At least, I know I can. On the one hand, ...

First off, I just want to say that this is stunning. Absolutely wonderful. You can immediately tell that this is personal, and that depth alone makes the poem excellent. "With ...

Love this! Really, the piece is beautiful. I adore the personification that you give to Sadness. It speaks volumes about the depth of the emotion. I think most everything I ...