greenjay

I'm back and my keyboard is smoking! Okay, here we go... First Knall lay in the darkness, listening to a distant bird chirping in the distance. Get rid of one ...

Good! I didn't find anything to comment on, which is a good thing :P. I wish I had such a cool game! If you ever make millions marketing it, tell ...

“So how much further until we reach The Last City?” Ya, you gotta fix this. It's really wierd. I’m not sure if the crowds here are better or worse in ...

“You let in-“ At that moment the boor dissolved and the man from last night stepped in. I think you meant door The (they) traversed many hallways and progressed down ...

Hmm...spooky. This could be really good, or it could be really wierd. Weird is not bad, but I mean wierd in a messed up sense. You can get off with ...

When he returned he dumped his load on the ground in between both there (their) sleeping areas. Vathen had found a spot near the edge of a cliff. If you ...

Knall’s eyes were constantly searching for Rezlel. He heard a gust of wind and turned around. Rezlel was floating there. He smiled and dove. Knall jumped after him and felt ...

Khor stood and saw Kizen being ripped apart. He looked around and saw thousands of Jelseves gathered around Khor . He smiled and stood silently. The Jelseves gathered closer and ...

Vathen looked around Yeseve and in his room but Vathen couldn’t find Khor anywhere. He began to ask various spirits about his whereabouts but none held the answer he was ...

Lyllan stepped in to the doorway, taking another apron of (off) the hook as she did so, and walked over to the boy, tying the straps to fit as she ...

One spirits handed the one that seemed to be in charge a needle with a long, grey tube coming out of the end. One spirit handed The closed his eyes ...

He ignores the food and cradled his head in his hands. ignored He went on through out his day, discussing the finer details of battle with a combat expert, and ...

Khor sat next to him and another grey-thing drifted over and put a large glass of swirling ice d tea on a small platform next to the chair. Khor took ...

Sup Polt. Me again... Knall was running as fast as his feet could carry him. He felt the wind blow by his face and the grass [s]blow [/s] swishing by ...

“Yes. They are the kings of Yeseve. They attempt to maintain peace and happiness and ("in" would be better than "and") this turbulent world.” Khor nodded to show he understood. ...