greenjay

I haven't been on in forever, so I might be a bit out of context, but I think I've read all of them up to here (correct me if you ...

“the throne is mine—I must claim it—but what I am without her?” but what am I without her. deispaire it's despare I think you need to lengthen the talk between ...

“Get off my throne.” Hehe... I didn't find anything wrong AGAIN. Come on, you got to make some spelling mistakes or I'll just keep having to post pointless posts like ...

Just one suggestion before I start. You might not want to post so often. Maybe it's just that I don't get on all that much, but it seems like you ...

24 is right. Dominic swallowed heavily as he saw them staring at him.‭ ‬He didn't know exactly what to tell them‭…‬so he decided not to [try] any sort of inspirational ...

Yay, another one :D! Sorry it took me so long to get to it. I've been gone a lot. As you moved around you also saw Vith with a string ...

Sorry it took me so long to get to it. Mistress J’engar managed it,” Fenn said bluntly . “And she hated our guts, didn’t she.” You used "Fenn said bluntly" ...

It had been largely overtaken by the vegetation, but the throne room was largely clean, and would serve them well. Mostly would be a better word. That's the only suggestion ...

Boy, it took you a while to get this one out :P. That's no problem though, gave me some time to rest :wink: . I really don't have anything to ...

Err...I'm confused :? . The first section about the ward or whatever is kind of confusing. I could probably read it through again and get it, but the point is ...

Wound of the Earth? SWEET! Maybe I'll finally find out what's going on :D. It was created by the great battle by Kynth and the mysterious power that Derez feared ...

“This is you first lesson in what it means to be a mage. In one hand you hold magic; and in the other is your sword. Use them simultaneously.” Your ...

Hey, sorry it took me so long to get to this. I haven't been on much lately... He slipped on a loose black shirt and his white jacket. He also ...

Hey! Sorry it took so long for me to get to this...I've been busy :P. “Come one!” He said. Knall jumped to the other platform, using his wings to direct ...

I only have two suggestions: 1) Read through this and correct punctuation, spelling, and grammar. I know they're horrible :P, but they are necessary. 2) Post more often. I read ...