grainne

This story seems very artsy almost like poetry! There are a few places where I think you might be able to flesh out the feelings of the characters a little ...

This poem is so sad because I think so many of us see this happening either to ourselves or people around us to some extent. You did an incredible job ...

I think you have good content and this is a really interesting way of getting across who you are as a person. My main advice would be to break up ...

Wow! This is the first time I've read an acrostic poem that was actually meaningful and beautiful as well as just fun. I have a few comments - feel free ...

Hello! This is a fun, entertaining poem. It seems like something I'd read on the pages of a children's picture book, with pictures of the ocean and animals alongside. From ...

What an interesting piece! Does this fit into some greater story or novel? It reads almost like a religious manuscript. It's hard to give in-depth feedback to this without more ...

Hi! This poem is fun, whimsical, but brings up a thought-provoking question - very well done! You call it "daydreaming" yet there is a lot of substance and structure within ...

Hi JoyfulMelody! Grainne here with a review on your song lyrics. As a musician myself, it's fun to see other people sharing songs on here. The whole time I was ...

Thanks for sharing your poem! It's fun to see all the variety in topics for poetry - anything from a reflection on love to a reflection on anger. This piece ...

Hi! Thanks for sharing your poetry. You wrote that you're not very good at poems, but I'd encourage you to just think about how good you can be at poetry, ...

Hi, This is an interesting piece! I am catching glimpses of a fascinating world, and I think this story has a lot of potential. I have just a few comments ...

Hi! This is a great beginning. I'm immediately drawn into the story and I want to know what happens next - always a good sign with a first chapter. :) ...

Hi! This is such a fun poem. I've never seen something along this premise before, so it was fun to read. You don't make it overly complicated, yet you have ...

Hi! What a fun piece to read. I can't wait to see the next installments. I love the beginning of your piece. It immediately draws me in as a reader. ...

Hi, What an enjoyable poem to read. I have a few comments after considering the piece, but overall it was very well-done. Let me know if you have any questions ...