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  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: I'm magic.

    Wow. I love this. It is very romantic and I like the style of poem you did. It is a great poem, and I like how you set it out. ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: Goofy

    I found this very humorous. I can tell you that this would be how many people feel. I definitely want to read more of your writing. A massive well done, ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: He Never Left

    I feel that this is probably what some people probably feel. I really liked how you set it out, and i can't wait to hear more from you. You have ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Benjamin Bumblebee

    I found this very humorous, and I like how you made it simple but creative. I feel that you didn't have to think too much, as I feel it came ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: I'm a Little Writer

    I really like this poem. I like the idea of twisting an old song, into something that writers go through whenever they get a eureka moment. I found this quite ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Science Fiction Re: Geronimo

    I can sense that this poem was from the bottom of your heart. I watched Dr Who while Matt was in it, and I have to say your poem captures ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Illusion

    This poem, while short, is extremely good. No, it is better than good, it is brilliant. Although the timing was not like other poems I have read, it still flowed ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Artist's Craft

    This is not my favorite poem,but perhaps it's just this style isn't my favorite. I think that this was very witty, because of the tone used and the vocabulary chosen. ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Heartless Love

    This is a great poem, I like the fact that you made it rhyme really well. I feel this is what love is really like. Your vocabulary is really good ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Other Men

    This is a very good poem, I like how you used a lot of vocabulary. the rhythm has good timing, and sounds really slick on the tongue. Your description is ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fanfiction Re: The Empire Chapter 2: The Mysterious One

    This chapter shows great character development. The relationship between Nicole and her brother seems like it is what a real brother and sister would do. I could just imagine this ...

    Jun 20, 2013


It's funny how humans can wrap their mind around things and fit them into their version of reality.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief