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Hello hello! Wow, interesting read! Somehow stories like these always captivate me. First off, I think you did a great job of creating a storyline straight from the beginning. There ...

Hi, missjacksons I just was perusing the stories for one to review and your title pulled me in. First things first, since this is a first chapter to what I'm ...

First I'd like to say I really like this story. Obviously it's like Cinderella in a very unique sister-like way. I love that you did the age jumps because it ...

First off, I like the title of this, it's very cute. May I ask why the lowercase letters are intentional? I have some ideas, but I don't want to be ...

I think the idea of YoungWritersSociety is for constructive criticism. I mean, that's why I'm here. And I haven't read your novel, but after this I just might. Yes, there ...

Hello there, I read this line and the first thing I could think of was Yoga. I've become so into that lately and it's all about breath and this to ...

I was intrigued when I first saw this because while I like writing novels/chapters, I have a soft spot for poems. Especially ones that have detail and imagery. I like ...

Hi! Here to review your short story! I'm just going to start with my thoughts after I finished reading it. Honestly, I didn't want it to stop. Cliffhangers will do ...

So I have not read anything of yours before this and decided to start with the prologue as one would. Let me say right off the bat that you have ...

As I was scrolling I noticed Harry and Louis's names and immediately was interested. I'm very intrigued with this story. As I was reading it I noticed a few things. ...

I like this story a lot. In all of it's, now take this with a grain of salt, "fucked up glory". It's incredibly well written and I find myself wanting ...

This is a fantastically written story. I really love how you used the second person point of view to connect your readers. The amount of detail you include in the ...

Holy shit I was not expecting that! Okay so the beginning with dialogue and such is similar to the other chapter and is written really well. My heart broke a ...

I love the mixture of sarcastic and cocky you've got going on here with Blane. He seems like a really solid main character with a troubled past. I'm hoping we ...

Whoah the end was kinda crazy! What the heck, omg! Cliffhangers suck! Anyway, the continuance of this story is really good and I'm assuming it takes place in Cali because ...