godlypopo

Thank you and an interesting intake from the poem^-^

Thanks for the review. I'll think about your advice in the future (but writing over the top is kind of difficult to avoid when that's what I do in a ...

I'll get to the nitpicks right away haha! Thank you so much for your amazing review!

No problem! Thanks for telling me the message it is a powerful one :D (I think the armpit pit threw me off course)

Thank you! Glad I understood it :D

No problem :D I'm surprised it's still in the green room!

Thank you! The asterisks where because of the program that I wrote it on but thank you for the decent amount of improvents. If you would like to know what ...

Whilst it does flow, there are so many ideas that at first I got a little confused and all over the place. But after reading it a few more times ...

Thank you so much :D I tend to write a lot of dark things haha. But I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Thank you so much! If you haven't yet, I recommend my first story for this Dr. Carnival - it will explain it a little more :D

Thank you once again!

Will do ^-^ (This may be around the weekend time (Thursday, Friday, Saturday, Sunday)

I'm just planning a story with my frind at the moment but I would love to collaborate with you!

Thank you! I always love hearing reviews from you :D

The reason I kept it short and simple was because I was entering it into a contest for a kid's book and I didn't want to over complicate it. Thanks ...